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Drinking In Evelyn Essay

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I agree with my peer Evelyn you pick a good, but very intresting topic. I see that you are very egeered towards the topic of drinking with really catches my antention knowing about others countires and how the regulate their drinking ages. Overall, what you got so far is pretty good, but I think it can be better. Try to think broader and also try to add more to your essay. The is minor grammer mistakes that I caought just like Evelyn. Just try to work one little minor things like that and I know you will have a great paper in your hands at the end.

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